That file doesn't have a legal location met, it's just a line. Should be Farawayplace.
As for effort values, Leondarkfury... there's a such thing as Pokemon without effort values. Obviously, why else would EV-reducing berries exist? :\
Last I checked, the HG/SS Pokesav, English version, is not able to make working codes. There's a problem with the Game ID, I think. The ID Pokesav uses... is the Japanese one? ... Well, I know it doesn't work, I've tried it (On my N. American version, still, regions shouldn't be an issue in this case).
Use something like Codr's Pokemon Generator, that can make all sorts of working codes. Been tested by plenty, it definitely does the trick.