*nevermind, sorry, missed the line before the pkm.* yeah, just make a note of the date you used in case someone questions, i guess. other than that, looks good.
VERY close, but that shiny PID can't exist for you on that day or any day nearby. find one with rng reporter. it's easy using the "shiny egg" tab in the built-in time finder.
e: if you did use rng reporter(and just picked a date far away from the hatch/pickup date) and you're seriously concerned about someone proving that you hacked it, just write down the date you used when you searched for shiny PIDs.