wraith89

<p><p><p><p><p><p>It's a short story. Although for me a short story is like a longer short story... That is supposed to tie into the short story I'm currently working on, the one of <em>DARKNESS</em> (the one I showed you a while back), </p></p></p></p></p></p>

<p><p><p><p><p><p>People don't always have to die for something to be lost, or a lesson to be learned. It depends on the theme, yes; but when people throw in death in every story it gives it less weight and just makes it seem like it's nothing to take seriously. I understand that in real life, things happen, and not always with a good reason. There are psychopaths out there that do kill people because they say, "hey, I can do that". But for a story that, especially for the assignment criteria, needs to have something lost and yet gained, it completely failed. A story does need conflict, I am undeniably aware of this, but if the author just says "let's kill someone! That'll get attention!" it bothers me.</p></p></p></p></p></p>

<p><p><p><p><p><p>I'll PM you I guess. I also put a short work in the PM.</p></p></p></p></p></p>