OK your Hydreigon has a move (Thunderbolt) that it cannot learn in any way shape or form so I gave it Charge Beam which it can learn. As for your Zoroark there is nothing wrong with it.
the only thing I can find odd is the locations which I changed for you to see if it still messes up. Also keep in mind it might not even be the pkm file causing the problem but the code itself. Or you can try this code
Dragonite.pkm
Very awesome. Hope this will answer a lot of peoples questions.
Ill admit while watching I was praying you didnt do anything wrong...and you didnt lol good job.
If the Origin is HG/SS the location would be (Poketransfer) and what ever level it is at that moment now if it is a hatched pokemon from HG/SS then you would put Day-Care Couple (Gen 4) as location and for hatched location it would be (Poketransfer).
well at first I was unable to connect with the full party then I went thru each one to find out which one was messing up and I got no more rejections. Then I went back in with the full party and was able to connect. I guess it was a problem on Nintendos end.
Pokegen is great for making legal pokemon it can be found here http://projectpokemon.org/forums/showthread.php?6424-Download-link-and-information also this guide will answer a lot of questions about making legal pokemon http://projectpokemon.org/forums/showthread.php?14026-Guide-How-to-generate-Gen-V-Pokmon-in-PokGen
The only problems I found were that you had encounter set to caught in a building and also your Zebstrika had no ability so i gave it lightning rod. BTW I only looked at the first 6 pokemon in your party.
lol already had it fixed before you made your new post. Problem was Genger had a Gen 4 only move (Icy wind) I changed that to Hidden Power Ice. If you wish to keep Icy wind change the origin to HG if you would like and change Location to Day-Care Couple (Gen 4) and the hatched location to (Poketransfer)
Speed Boost Blaziken can only be Male. Also you have both your Heatrans as hatched even tho Heatrans are impossible to breed and should have location marked as (Poketransferred) and other Pokemon with a lot of problems like Samurott and Chandelure with unreleased ability's garchomp with illegal moves (magma storm) and pokemon that you have marked as hatched should have their location as Day-Care Couple. I left the garchomps moveset the same and also the illegal ability's the same but i fixed all of the incorrect locations on the Pokemon,both the Heatrans as well as the Blazikens gender for you. You may want to fix those. One more thing please use this guide to help you make legal pokemon http://projectpokemon.org/forums/showthread.php?14026-Guide-How-to-generate-Gen-V-Pokmon-in-PokGen
When making a Pokemon appear transferred from a different Gen always put location as (poketransfer) its near the very top. Also, please use this guide as a resource http://projectpokemon.org/forums/showthread.php?14026-Guide-How-to-generate-Gen-V-Pokmon-in-PokGen
No problem this link should have all you need to know. http://projectpokemon.org/forums/showthread.php?14026-Guide-How-to-generate-Gen-V-Pokmon-in-PokGen. If you have any problems just send me a message and Ill send what I can do to help.
Every Pokemon there has a Gen 4 only move so in order to make them legal you have to show them as poketransferred from a Gen 4 game such as HG/SS D/P/Pt. Try these out and see if you still have the same problem.
garchomp.pkm
metagross.pkm
salamance.pkm
Give this a try. Also there is no way to make a Pokemon Legit. It either is or it isn't. the best one can do with Pokegen or Pokesav is to make a LEGAL Pokemon which is very different.
xXFLAMEZXx_Transfered.pkm
no EVs, or specific IVs?
Edit1: also Cresselia does NOT learn Recover but it does learn Moonlight so ill put that there instead.
Edit2: This is what i have. if you wish to change the EVs then please do so.