Here's a few problems I've noticed:
Pokemon Names- Hatoopoo should be Hatooboo
Doreida should be Doredia
When my Futachimaru evolved into Daikenki, its name did not change, it stayed at Futachimar (Apparently, Futachimaru is just one letter too long).
Try to agree on the Raimon city gym leader's name. I've seen two different versions. one japanese direct romanization, and one english trans for it.
If v5 changes the names of any non-nicknamed pokemon that you own to the correct names, that would be appreciated, since Daikenki and Doredia are just a bit too long for the 5 character limit.
There are also plenty of grammatical errors, and speech cut-offs.
Also, the Plasma grunts and Bel at the dream lot call Geechisu, "Getis". Again, pick one.