Good Work also,
in Pokemon White a few things.
Words
http://i56.tinypic.com/1iso.jpg
Words 2: Like Silent Storm said maybe change fight to have or do.
http://i54.tinypic.com/2irujyb.jpg
Words 3: Maybe make it say see, When I first read that I didn't understand it at first I guess I just don't think it's necessary.
http://i52.tinypic.com/6gzrxy.jpg
Words 4: Maybe make it say "It's not like I didn't want POKABU from the start anyway." - Add It's.
http://i55.tinypic.com/219nus8.jpg
Words 5: Our "guys" ??? What about Our Pokemon.
http://i56.tinypic.com/2i0985k.jpg
Words 6 More cut off words.
http://i54.tinypic.com/adoqd5.jpg
Words 7 More cut off words.
http://i53.tinypic.com/29yo0so.jpg
Words 8 No space after the comma I'm not entirely sure.
http://i53.tinypic.com/2wd6654.jpg
Thanks to my friend for pointing these out.