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10 GoodAbout Raguto
- Birthday 08/27/1991
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Words 17:Run off. http://i53.tinypic.com/luvk1.jpg Words 18: Your instead of you're. http://i52.tinypic.com/28u6zk5.jpg Words 19: F your pokemon run out of PP lol . http://i51.tinypic.com/6gvofl.jpg Also the bulletin board where I posted the spelling error of Departement the word before that is Ishu and should be Isshu?
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Words 9: Shouldn't it be continuous. http://i51.tinypic.com/2qiokdi.jpg Words 10: The N in intentions. http://i55.tinypic.com/2805mhv.jpg Words 11: the R in Through. http://i51.tinypic.com/34y2r1l.jpg Words 12: She says Pokemon are really cool! 'Anyone who thinks "its" not are lame' Should be Anyone who thinks they aren't is lame. http://i56.tinypic.com/k4uq1c.jpg Words 13: I put this 1 because I noticed a few others spots were "Ishu" and I didn't catch them so I thought at first Ishu was right and not Isshu. http://i51.tinypic.com/2ch98bs.jpg Words 14: Should add a 'You' in there. Or else you won't be able. http://i52.tinypic.com/25qyyc8.jpg Words 15: Departement should be Department. http://i55.tinypic.com/2q2fvup.jpg Words 16: YOOTERII description on the What' http://i51.tinypic.com/106ezio.jpg Sorry for bad quality
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Good Work also, in Pokemon White a few things. Words http://i56.tinypic.com/1iso.jpg Words 2: Like Silent Storm said maybe change fight to have or do. http://i54.tinypic.com/2irujyb.jpg Words 3: Maybe make it say see, When I first read that I didn't understand it at first I guess I just don't think it's necessary. http://i52.tinypic.com/6gzrxy.jpg Words 4: Maybe make it say "It's not like I didn't want POKABU from the start anyway." - Add It's. http://i55.tinypic.com/219nus8.jpg Words 5: Our "guys" ??? What about Our Pokemon. http://i56.tinypic.com/2i0985k.jpg Words 6 More cut off words. http://i54.tinypic.com/adoqd5.jpg Words 7 More cut off words. http://i53.tinypic.com/29yo0so.jpg Words 8 No space after the comma I'm not entirely sure. http://i53.tinypic.com/2wd6654.jpg Thanks to my friend for pointing these out.