Vire.

[Electivire]

:creep:Well long time no see guys, here is the team that got me as nr 1 on the ladder. I dont have much time to write description of the team now and will do it later.:frown::biggrin:

Heatran @ Focus Sash

Flash Fire

Naive

4 Atk / 252 SpA / 252 Spe

- Fire Blast

- Earth Power

- Stealth Rock

- Explosion

Gyarados @ Life Orb

Intimidate

Jolly

4 HP / 252 Atk / 252 Spe

- Dragon Dance

- Ice Fang

- Stone Edge

- Waterfall

Tyranitar @ Leftovers

Sand Stream

Jolly

6 HP / 252 Atk / 252 Spe

- Dragon Dance

- EQ

- Stone Edge

- Ice Punch

Salamence @ Life Orb

Intimidate

Naive

252 Speed, 232 Attack, 24 SpAtt

- Dragon Dance

- Outrage

- Earthquake

- Fire Blast

Magnezone @ Choice Scarf

Magnet Pull

Timid

4 HP / 252 Sp Atk / 252 Spe

- HP Fire

- Thunderbolt

- Explosion

- Signal Beam

Weavile @ Choiche Band

Pressure

Jolly

40 HP / 252 Atk / 216 Spe

- Pursuit

- Ice Shard

- Brick Break

- Ice Punch

Well as you see guys, i dont have any Grass Atks wich i want to get in but is difficult. I will write descriptions later,

- Vire.

[Shay]

Ehm, ok. Earthquake over Stone Edge/Ice Fang, because of Vaporeon.

Magnezone with Signal Beam? lol...stab Flash Canon over Signal Beam (Tyranitar).

[Substitute]

An explanation on your pokes would be useful..

[randomspot555]

Heatran @ Focus Sash

Flash Fire

Naive

4 Atk / 252 SpA / 252 Spe

- Fire Blast

- Earth Power

- Stealth Rock

- Explosion

Heatran as a suicide lead seems fairly pointless. Azelf can run 3/4 of this exact same set, and can Taunt. Has better speed, better attack, and only 5 base points less in special attack.

The reason to run Shuca Berry over Focus Sash is so Heatran is more than just a lead. You can take it out after it lays down Stealth Rock and save it for later in the game.

So change it to Shuca Berry or switch to Azelf.

Gyarados is standard. But with SR, sand storm, and life orb, it'll have a very short life span. Ditto with Salamence.

Tyranitar is standard

However, all threeof these Pokemon ARE DOING THE EXACT SAME THING. All 3 are stat boosting DD physical sweepers. There's no need for three of them, and Tyranitar being on the same team ensures the other two will die quickly.

Magnezone is standard, but I don't really recommend exploding it since steel trapping is very useful.

Weavile is standard.

So, let's run this down:

Of your 6 Pokemon, only Tyranitar will be able to actually take any hits. And because it has the standard 252/252/6 spread, it won't be taking that many.

THREE STEALTH ROCK WEAK POKEMON.

The only Pokemon you can kind of counter is Scizor. You have no clear counter for anything else.

This isn't really a team. This is 6 OU Pokemon with copy/pasted Smogon sets with no clear thought or strategy behind them.

I'm closing this. Feel free to re-post when you put roles/descriptions into your post.