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DalDal

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  1. Hey guys,

    Thought I would finally get involved with the competitive scene (was always too lazy before). So I just made my first team and I need to know if it has any obvious/stupid mistakes in it. Also, any criticisms or ideas/improves/suggestions are really welcome.

    At A Glance:

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    Aerodactyl @ Focus Sash

    Nature: Jolly

    Ability: Pressure

    EVs: 252 Attack/252 Speed/4HP

    Role: Suicide Lead

    - Crunch

    - Earthquake/ Roar

    - Stealth Rock

    - Stone Edge

    Comment: Basically this assures me I can put Stealth Rock up with focus sash and then either switch/attack depending on the situation. However, I need to know if Roar is a good idea? I was thinking I could just put down stealth rock, and if the pokemon is a strong counter to my aero I could just Roar their poke out (whilst damaging his next poke). This is all based on the assumption Roar has no speed priority...does it? If not I can stick with my current Earthquake build.

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    Pokemon Alakazam @ Focus Band

    Nature: Modest

    Ability: Inner Focus

    EVs: 252 Sp.A/252 Speed/4 HP

    Role: Special Sweeper

    - Shadow Ball

    - Psyhic

    - Grass Knot

    - Focus Blast

    Comment:I wasn't entirely sure about which item to attach. I tried Choice Specs. but it ended up biting in my the ass as I couldnt use the variety of my other moves....so i played it safe and stuck with Focus Band (which im starting to see as a bad idea due to stealth rocks).

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    Pokemon Electivire @ Expert Belt

    Nature: Adamant

    Ability: Motor Drive

    EVs: 252 Attack/252 Speed/4 HP

    Role: Physical Sweeper

    - Ice Punch

    - Thunder Punch

    - Fire Punch

    - Earthquake

    Comment: Just a standard physical sweeper I guess. I like the variety of his movepool a lot and so didnt want choice items restricting it.

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    Magnezone @ Choice Specs

    Nature: Modest

    Ability: Magnet Pull

    EVs: 252 Sp.A/252 Speed/4 HP

    Role: Special Sweeper

    - Flash Cannon

    - Explosion

    - Thunderbolt

    - Hidden Power (rock)/????

    Comment: Standard special sweeper I guess. I like having Choice Specs. on this guy as his movepool is quite limited as it is so I'm not missing out on too much. However I am pretty stuck with my fourth move. I wanted it to be a different type Hidden Power but I got stuck with rock. Should I leave it or do you have any other reccomendations for his fourth spot?

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    Forretress @ Leftovers

    Nature: Impish

    Ability: Sturdy

    EVs: 252 HP/ 178 Def./ 80 Attack

    Role:

    - Earthquake

    - Explosion

    - Rapid Spin

    - Spikes

    Comment: I guess just a standard physical wall. I needed one and I liked foretresses resistances/stats. Explosion can come in handy too (hence attack EV's).

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    Dusknoir @ Leftovers

    Nature: Impish

    Ability: Pressure

    EVs: 252 HP/ 204 Sp.Def/54 Def.

    Role: Special Wall

    - Shadow Sneak

    - Fire Punch

    - Pain Split

    - Will-o-Wisp

    Comment: Standard special wall. Had really good IV's when I found him (31 in Def, Sp. Def and Speed, 28 HP) but had a REALLY low attack iv of 6. I dont know how damaging that attack iv of 6 is, but his other iv's were awesome so I kept him. Also im not so sure about his moveset. I like Shadow Sneak (catches people off-guard all the time), Painsplit and will-o-wisp - but im not so sure about fire punch. I mean it helps deal with poke such as heracross and is the only fire move on my team....but its very weak, especially combinded with the fact my Dusk has terribble attack.

    So I've only ever played 3 games of poke online, and it doesnt seem like this team has any crazy uber weaknesses, but I feel like it could really do with some improvement. I kind of want one more bulky pokemon that I can switch in to, but I also want to retain the solid offensive set-up I have going (i think its offensive at least?). I was thinking maybe a Heatran in place for my Alakazam, but not too sure.

    Any help/tips for online would be great.

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